I think that what you wrote was actually very logical. But, think about this, what if you added a little information? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your blog, but what if you added a headline that grabbed a person's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda boring. You could look at Yahoo's home page and see how they create news headlines to grab viewers interested. You might add a video or a related pic or two to get readers interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it would bring your posts a little livelier.
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